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Within all Life there is Death
Within all Death there is Life
~Therefore~
If there is no Life, there is no Death
& If there is no Death, there can be no Life

At least fucking ink it you lazy bastard! It sucks Evan, it sucks bad. I am neither entertained or amused, just confused and slightly revolted at the lack of quality. Sure a webcomic does not need at strong start to really get going. But please don't make me cry such bitter tears of shame with you're next page.

Tell me, why has your editor not slapped you in the face, hard? There's a fine line between it's so crazy and off the wall it's funny and This is so pathetic and shameless I'm going to take up heroin instead of web comics now, and suck dick in airport bathrooms for drug money.

Scanners are murder on pencil drawings, get the fuck over it and adapt! even more so murder than your jokes. Know what I want to see? Some expression or wait even better and fucking Punchline.

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It only hurts when I think.
And we all fly off of this absurd merry go round of self-piy, selfishness, and minimum-wage.

Point of fact: the comic is not inked, as both Evan and I agreed that it far better represents not only the character himself, but the very heart of the message we wished to convey.

Similar to the character, the work we present is unfinished, raw, and not always completely there. Inking a comic brings a certain level of cleanliness and completeness to an image, which we did not (and do not) want to convey.

The comic will never be inked. It will never be clean. It will never be purified. The artifacts produced by scanning are exactly the way we want it to be. It is not a side effect, it is the idea. Do not assume that anything in these images is not precisely the way we intended.

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I know where my towel is

How delightfully pretentious.

I haven't assumed anything, I called you lazy because I'm mean. A community at large will doubtfully appreciate your artful dissection of your own work more than the work itself.

point of fact: I'm saying it isn't funny it's awkward only those devoid of higher thoughts other than hot topic is way cool may laugh at this. And at a glance, which in my opinion is all you'll be getting from your viewership, unfinished work (In the context of a webcomic!) is sloppy and uninteresting not poetic and deep.

If your jokes are obscure, without context, and based solely on violence is funny. Then you yourself will be nothing more than obscure. If none other than the minority can connect to what your saying, what's the point?

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It only hurts when I think.
And we all fly off of this absurd merry go round of self-piy, selfishness, and minimum-wage.

Ah, but I've missed the point .

Will you actually discuss this with me or will you rationalize at me and brush me off as the lunatic.

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It only hurts when I think.
And we all fly off of this absurd merry go round of self-piy, selfishness, and minimum-wage.

You make some good points, at the same time, I'm not willing to change the art or style I've come up with to increase my viewers. I will work to improve the character, imagery & content as I'm able.

However thus far, the comics have been posted in order of their creation, I hope that you'll keep continue to read it & observe for yourself how the content of humor diversifies itself. Also as the content begins to touch on other things, the context will be provided so that people who do not already know the reference, will be able to easily access the source & see for themselves.

Thanks for the critique, continue to follow it as I post them & I hope you will come to have a greater like for way in which I've presented it. As I hope that the quality of it will in turn attract more of an audience.

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Within all Life there is Death
Within all Death there is Life
~Therefore~
If there is no Life, there is no Death
& If there is no Death, there can be no Life